Hello everyone! I am the mighty Avenger of English, punisher of the miscreants who choose to defile the wonderful English language. I have found myself a worthy opponent in Ryo-Kun313’s piece of fanfiction. Who will win? Stay tuned! bond between friends
Avenger of English: Oh god, I’m already having second thoughts about this whole MiSTing thing already.
chapter 1: the foreshadow dream
AE: Because, you know, I had an oxymoron dream the other night.
disclaimer do not own Avatar but i do own my original person p.s. this take place after the be sing SE arc...
AE: Arc? Am I missing something here?
i have just seen the season finale and i wrote this before that...so lets say zuko didn't betray his uncle.
AE: Somewhere, an English professor has died.
and lets say Azula didn't control be sigh se.
AE: *sigh* is right.
and lets say aanng can control the avatar state. other than that enjoy the story!!!
AE: *fears for her sanity*
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" where am i, what is this place?" said aang.
AE: (Aang) I thought you said left turn at Albuquerque!
he was in a world were there was nothing around.
AE: Kind of like this story!
just darkness, he was starting to get scared and starts running.
AE: He’s going the distance!
while running he hears a voice.
AE: Because we all hear disembodied voices while we run.
" aang why are you running?"
"who are you?" ask aang
AE: *sings* Whooo are you? Who, who, who, who?
" I'm you...or at least the former you" said the voice
suddenly a great fire came out of the ground.
AE: Kind of like the Burning Bush!
out of the fire was one of the greatest avatars that ever lived...avatar Roku. " nice to see you again aang" said Roku.
AE: At least Roku can spell Aang’s name correctly.
Anng lets of a sigh of relief and speaks to Roku.
AE: (English Professor) Tense Change! Ah, my chest! *falls*
" geez Roku don't scare me like that" said the avatar
AE: Avatar Aang or Avatar Roku?
" sorry, but this was the only way i could contact you... but i have something important to say to you" said Roku
AE: (Roku) You need to get out of this crappy fic now!
" Roku...what important business do you want me to know" said Aangg
" just this, tomorrow when you land in the next town look out for a certain person
AE: Avatar Roku astonishes me with his clarity.
in that town." said Roku..
Aangg raised his eyebrow " what do you mean look out for this person?...is this person
AE: A pedophile?
evil?
AE: Same difference.
" no...but if you be Friends
AE: Oh my god, it’s like a course in Ebonics!
with this person...your life and the life of others will be in danger" said Roku
" danger? wait...who is this person? what his name?" ask Anng
"i don't know Aanng, but if your smart enough you'll keep away from him" said Roku
AE: But of course, I’m going to take a wild guess and say that this story’s Aang will not be smart enough.
" avatar Aangg, please be careful..."
AE: At this random line, I have counted 4 different ways to spell Aang.
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Roku then disappeared
AE: Behind curtain number 3!
in a dark fog. a few moments he wakes up,
AE: But I thought Roku disappeared?
it's at least 8 o' clock in the morning. Aangg looks around where everyone, Katara is practicing her waterbending. toph was still
AE: Blind?
sleep,
AE: Close enough.
Sokka was sharpen his boomerang sword,
AE: Boomerang sword?!
(Random Soldier) Take this, evil scum! *throws boomerang sword, only to have it come back* Oh, crap.
Appa was awoke
AE: (Author) A, E, I, O, and U can be used interchangeably, right?
(AE) No.
playing with momo. Katara notices that he is awoke and walks over to talk to him,
" good morning
AE: America!
Aang" said Katara
" hey Katara..." said Aang
" whats wrong?" said Katara
AE: Other than this story, of course.
" i had this weird dream" said Aang
AE: (Aang) That I was in this crappy story… and oh, my god it’s real!
Sokka who was listening in to what Aangg was saying came in and spoke to him. " what dream? "he said
AE: (Martin Luther King Jr.) I have a dream!
" well, it was me and avatar Roku...he told me to stay away from a person...he didn't say who" said the bald monk
AE: Bald monk? Never heard that one before.
" why would her say that" said Sokka
"i don't know he said this person is to dangerous to be around with." said Aanng
AE: Wow, this news bulletin says there has been an unnatural increase in heart failure among English professors today.
" well we should stay clear of whoever this person is" said Sokka
" hey whats the next village called?" said Katara
AE: (Surviving English Professor) Hay is for horses, young lady!
Sokka then pulls out his map and looks at where they are at. he puts his finger on the map and shows where there at. " ok where here, the next town is here...its called mixed town
AE: Mixed Town? It sounds like the name of a Disney toddler show.
...now why would they called it that?" said Sokka
" who knows...but someone in there is a person i must avoid" said Aanng
" don't worry it says its a big town
AE: That’s a very informative map.
so we wont run into him" said Katara
just then Toph wakes up without them noticing. she preforms an earthbending move to cover them in dirt, the gang coughs and she walks up to them and smiles. " good morning everybody! how are you guys doing" said Toph
" TOPH! WHY THE HELL DID YOU DO YOU DO THAT?!?!" said Sokka
" well you guys were talking all serious so i made you guys a little happy" said Toph
AE: Because getting covered in dirt is exactly how I like to start my mornings.
" how? buy throwing dirt at our face? that's not funny" said Katarra
AE: But her name’s spelling is.
" was for me...but anyway whats going on?" said Toph
" we were talking about going to this town called mixed town for supplies...hey Toph do you know why its called that?" ask aang
" well i herad it was called that cause rumor has it that it was a haven for all benders to live at...for those who don't go with the war" said Toph
AE: (Sergeant) Damn peace-loving hippies!
" all benders? even fire nation" said Aang
"yeah...hey i just had a thought aangg
AE: Which in this story seems like a rarity.
,... while were there why don't we look for you a fire bender trainer. i man its possible that there is one." said Toph. Aanng then smiled and nodded his head. he then got dress
AE: (Aang in a dress) I feel pretty, oh so pretty, so pretty, and witty!
and hop on his bison
AE: (Appa) Ow!
"well what are we waiting for. lets go!" Said Aang
AE: Whose name was spelled correctly.
" hold on aangg we got to grab our stuff" said Katarra
AE: And then, it wasn’t.
the gang ( and momo of course :) )
AE: :(
grab there things and hop on Appa. when everyone was set aangg cried out his yip yip chant
AE: It’s a chant now?
at appa and the Bison flew.
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god this chapter is short!!!
AE: And yet, my eyes still bleed.
hope you guys like it!! p.s oh yeah if you guys are wondering what happen to Zuko don't worry hell come up later
AE: Yes, I am sure Hell will come up later, if it hasn’t already.
chapter 2: Akuma
AE: (Timon and Pumbaa) Hakuna Matata!
PS i do not own Avatar...duh.
AE: Duh, is right. I feel like I’m losing brain cells by the second by reading this story.
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A few hours
the gang is still flying towards
AE: The sun!
mixed town for supplies, while looking Aanng is still pondering who this person is. he also starts to wonder if
AE: Feeding those weird berries to Appa was such a good idea.
(Aang) What’s that smell?
going to this town is a good idea.
" hey guys...are you sure we should go to this town?" said Aanng.
" Aanng its the closest town here and the next town is way to far." said Sokka
" i know but whoever this person
AE: The “certain person”.
is we have to stay clear of him" said Aanng.
Katarra the looks down from the side of appa and see a huge city...almost as big as BA sing SE.
AE: Because the Ba and Se of Ba Sin Se are just more important.
she yells at the res of the gang. " hey guys i think were here!" said Katarra yelled.
AE: Said Katarra yelled?! I need to pray to the gods of grammar to save the souls of the dying English professors.
the rest of the gang look to the side of the bison and see the huge city.
" wow thats big " said Toph
AE: (Sokka looks down) Thanks!
" wait, i thought you was blind?" said Sokka
AE: Honey, the Ebonics are baaack.
" i'am, it was sarcastism...jeez how stupid are you?" said the blind girl.
AE: Apparently, stupid enough to read this story.
all Sokka did was just pout his face and and look forward. Aanng tells his bison to land in a spot where no one will find him(A/E: he didn't want him to get kidnapped again.)
AE: *sarcastically* Really? I had no idea that was the reason!
when they landed they headed towards the city...when they arrived they were amazed by how many people lived there.
" holy crap!! at least 1,000,000 people live here" said Sokka
AE: I’m surprised that this story’s Sokka can count that high.
" yeah...we should start looking for supplies" said Aanng
" ok how about we split up
AE: (Fred) Okay gang, let’s spilt up! Daphne, you’re with me. Velma, Shaggy, and Scooby, you guys go together.
...Sokka you can go with Aanng and I'll be with Toph. you guys look and see if there really benders around here and we will look for the supplies." said Katarra.
" sounds reasonable...we meet back here at sunset" said Aanng.
so the gang split up, the boys went their way and the girls went there way. meanwhile a boy with a red scar and a man in his early 60s
AE: The folks down at AARP are going to complain of ageism.
were on a boat on there way to a town.
" uncle, i don't know if what i did was right...i mean she was my own sister and i
AE: It’s not butter.
badly hurt her" said the scared boy
AE: Are we talking about the same Zuko here?
" no Zuko, what you did was right. she was trying to kill you or make you a slave to the fire nation. you had to do what you had to do." said Iroh
AE: (Cowboy Impression) A man’s gotta do what a man’s gotta do.
" i know, but what she told me stills bothers me." said Zuko
Flashback
its at the outskirt
AE: Ba Sin Se was poor and couldn’t afford more than one outskirt like the other girls at school.
of be singh se, Azula lies down on her back with blood dipping from her forehead and her battle clothes are burn...her eyes stareing at her Brother who has a couple of burn marks on his body. both of their hands are still smoking
AE: Crack!
from fire bending.
" i can't believe
AE: (Azula) I’m in this crappy story!
i lose to a outcast like you, and to think you can do lighting bending with your swords
AE: Science Moment! Lightning + 2 metal sticks = 1 fried Zuko.
... well what are you waiting for finish me off!!" said Azula.
Zuko just nodded his head. " no, unlike you i don't try to kill my own blood" said Azula
AE: *is confused*
" what are you talking about!! you dare spare my life!! this is why you were banish from the fire nation!! you show compassion towards you enemies...why wont you kill me!!?" yelled Azula
" its like i said before...your my blood, my sister, no matter how much i hate you...i can't kill you, because I'll be more sad then when mom left
AE: Oh, god, angsty Zuko.
...I'll be more hurt than the day dad gave me this scar." Zuko then begins to walk while still speaking to Azula. " Tell my farther that i no longer care about returning to the throne...i live my own life, not by his." said Zuko
AE: Major OOC Zuko right there.
Azula for the first time starts to developed tears in her eyes,
AE: When did Azula develop tear ducts?
she cries out Zuko name. " wait Zuko!!!" she said. Zuko then turns around to look at Azula crying.
AE: Did I just see the word crying after the word Azula?!
" yeah Azula?" he ask
" about mom...she's dead" said Azula.
AE: (Zuko) Really?
(Azula) No, Zuko, I am your mother.
(Zuko) *dies*
Zuko face turn into hororr when Azula said that. " what do you mean she's dead? what happen!?!"
" Remember that day when i said father was gonna kill you...i wasn't lying he was gonna kill you, but mom tried to convince dad other wise...but he didn't listen. he said that if she care so much about that failure then she would take his place in death...she agreed and that when farther command her to committed sepukku
AE: *snickers*
(A/E: its a suicide death penalty when you stab yourself many times.)
AE: Do you mind?! I’m reading here.
" Azula said.
Zuko thinks back to when the last time he saw his mom, and when she told him to never to forget who he is. tears began to from around Zuko Eyes. Azula then continues on " if your not returning to the throne the at least do this...help the Avatar kill farther for mothers Sake
AE: Major OOC Azula.
" Azula then pass out.
End of Flashback
AE: Thank god.
" prince Zuko...don't worry if what she said was true then what are you gonna do?" said Ihro
AE: I can’t visualize Iroh saying, “gonna”.
" uncle...i don't know but i have to look for the Avatar" Said Zuko.
"your still trying to capture him? but i thought..." said Ihro
" I'm not...i just need to talk to him" said Zuko
AE: (Zuko) And then I’ll kick his sorry ass.
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meanwhile back in mixed town
AE: (Disney Creatures) Happy, happy, happy mixed town!
Aanng and Sokka are still looking for a fire bender trainer in mixed town. a trolly
AE: I seriously thought that said troll the first 3 times I read it.
with earth benders pushing it came by them, they decide to get on and ride into the deeper part of the town. Aanng then looks at a man sitting next to him.
AE: (Borat) Very Nice! *kisses man on cheeks*
" excuse me sir, do you know of any fire benders that live here?" said Aanng
" heh heh, sorry kid your 100 years too late...the only benders that live here are earth benders" said the man
" great, no chance of finding any here" said Sokka. the man then took a close look at the Aanng and spoke to him again
" your the Avatar aren't you?" said the man.
AE: The blue arrows really give that away, don’t they?
" yes i am" said the Avatar
" oh my its an honor to meet you!...hey why don't you come over my house to meet my family?" said the man
AE: This man is either retarded or way too trusting.
" thanks but were looking for supplies and trying to leave quickly as possible." said Sokka
" if your looking for supplies we can help...i work on a farm and we have lots of food and water for you to eat" said the man
AE: (Man) Yeah, my kids don’t have to eat this week.
(Kid) Daddy, my tummy hurts.
(Man) Shut up, or I’ll bring the paddle back out!
(Kid) No!
Sokka grab Aanng and started to whisper in his ear."Aaang what do you think? think he's the guy we suppose to avoid?" said Sokka.
" i don't think so...he seems nice
AE: You know, Chancellor Palpatine seemed nice too, but look how that ended.
...i say we go" said Aanng.
Sokka then turn his attention to the man and nodded his head up and down
AE: Like a bobble-head!
...the man nodded back and they waited on the bus for it to take them to the old man house.
Else where Katarra and Toph are at the towns Market looking for supplies. a man with a stand and a wired mustasce try to lure the ladies to his stand. " hey Ladies
AE: (Man) How much for both?
come over here a sec and look at what i got" said the man. they walk over to him
" what do you got?" said Katarra
" well, its a potion that makes you more attracted to men...got a certain boy in mind?" the man said with a evil
AE: Evil or Seductive?
smile. Toph begins to laugh " well she has one in mind" said Toph.
Katarra then blushes angrily
AE: You can blush angrily?
at Toph " w-what!!! i do not have a crush on him!" said Toph
AE: *is confused again*
" i didn't say you did...did i?" said Toph. Katarra face turn red. the man continues on. " so how about it all of this for 10 gold coins?" said the man. suddenly a women came in and stop the old man.
" you again didn't i say don't do this again?!" said the women. the man saw the woman and ran off, the girls confused by what just happen Kattara ask Questions. " hey what just happen " Katarra said.
" oh sorry...iam one of this towns law enforcements, that man was trying to swindle you...oh and may name is June." she said
AE: That is an interesting way to introduce yourself.
(Random Person) Yeah, you were just mugged, and by the way I’m Bob.
" swindle? well thanks for saving us" said Toph
" no problem, hey wanna come by my farm?"
AE: These Mixed Townsfolk are way too trusting. Probably because they are owned by the Disney company.
said June. they both nodded their heads and went with June to the farm.
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Sokka and Aanng arived at the farm, their amazed at how big it is.
" wow this is huge!!!
AE: (Sokka looks down again) Thanks!
you actually live and work here!?!" they both said
" i know well come on inside" smiled the man. they went across the farm...while walking Sokka notice a boy in a fighting stance with long black hair and green eyes looking at some sheep.
AE: With lust.
" hey old man...who is that?" said Sokka
AE: Sokka is both stupid and socially inept. What a combination.
the man looks at the boy " oh...that's my son Akuma
AE: That is what happens when you slam the keyboard in frustration.
...hes about to heard sheep...oh and call me jasper" said Jasper. the boy then fling his arm forward bringing up a wall of rock. he then swings his arms to the left, the right and a wall of rock can up to the left and right. the sheep, trap in the wall run towards the cage in front of them.
AE: Killing untold numbers of sheep in the process.
"wow he an earth bender?" said Aanng
"yep, the best earth bender in mixed town, he won countless earth bender tournaments "
AE: God help us! Gary Sue!
said the farmer.he then calls his son name " Akuma! come here, i want you to meet some one".
Akuma looks at his dad and just nodded his head.Jasper and the boys walk into his house and waited for him. a few minutes later Akuma came in the house at look at all of then.
" dad, who
AE: Wants to be a millionaire?
are these people?" said Akuma
" Akuma this is Sokka and Aanng...Aanng is the avatar" said Jasper. Akuma took a hard look at the Avatar. he close his eyes and begins to laugh. "ha,ha,ha farther you got to be kidding...this short skinny little kid is the avatar? i have a better time believing that pigs can fly" said Akuma
AE: They have pigs in the Avatarverse?
" hey! he is the Avatar, he the one who will defeat the fire lord and save the world." defended Sokka.
" yeah right, he just a kid about my age at least...what experience does he have?" said Akuma
" Akuma, don't disrespect the Avatar like that he is going to save the world."said Jasper
"oh really? and how do you know that? did you ask the Avatar that? i mean he is all knowing...right?"
AE: Sort of like Jesus!
said Akuma. Aanng just stared at Akuma for a while not answering him. Akuma starts to get angery
AE: You wouldn’t like him when he’s angry.
"hey Avatar can answer the question?!"
"Akuma stop! i think you need to go outside and pick up the hay"
AE: Picking up hay is such a great stress-reliever.
said the framer. Akuma listens to his farther and goes back outside.Jasper turns to the boys and apologize.
" iam so sorry..he usually alot nicer than that.". said the Jasper. Sokka then whispers in Aanng ear
" you know you could had answer him" said Sokka
" i know but i was thinking...what if avatar roku was talking about him????"
AE: If?!
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that the end of chapter 2 hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!
AE: This reminds of a piece of wisdom from America the Book. “Anything more than six exclamation points just looks silly. See!!!!!!!!!”
Chapter 3: secrets
PS. i do not own Avatar. but i do own my OC's
AE: Yeah, I’m sure everyone is just clamoring to own them….
also i know the season finale just happen but iam sticking to the story.
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Katarra and toph were walking on the farm were June was taking them. Toph felt that the area was big, Katarra look around the farm in awe. " man this is a huge farm" said Katarra
AE: (Sokka looking down yet again) Thanks!
" yeah my dad hit the jackpot when we won the lotto"
AE: The lottery exists too? What next, casinos?
. said June. they walk towards a small house which appears to be June's home.
AE: *sees house with bright neon sign saying June’s Home*
as soon as June was about to open the door it open it self and out came Akuma.
" oh hi sister June. i see you're back from you duty's." said Akuma
" yeah. Akuma this is Katarra and toph there here for supplies." said June. Akuma look at the girls
AE: Because he was just such a player.
but mostly at Toph and her eyes. " wow you have pretty eyes" said Akuma. Toph felt that Akuma was talking to her, she actually blushed a little." uhh...thank you?" Toph said.
AE: Major OOC Toph, too. Maybe OOC Zuko, OOC Azula, and OOC Toph will meet up.
"brother...wheres dad? i need to tell them that Katarra and Toph know the avatar!" said June. Akuma then look at them a little annoyed that she mention the Avatars name. " he's in there with the bald monk
AE: These characters seem to like the title Bald Monk for Aang.
and a guy with a funny haircut." said Akuma. he then starts walking on to the Fields. the girls knew who he was talking about. Katarra pulled toph and they went inside the house.
inside the house they saw Aanng, sokka and Jasper sitting
AE: On each other.
(Sokka) It’s not what you think!
at the table together. " hey Katarra...how did you guys get here?"said Aanng.
" well June brought us here. she said that he can give us supplies" said Katarra.
" funny... jasper brought us here for the same thing" said Sokka. toph then spoke to everyone at the same time " hey, i think I'll go outside...i can't stand bening in a house." said Toph. she then walk out.
they then talk, Aanng told them some stories
AE: (Aang) And then they made me their chief.
and June and Jasper just listen. except Katarra who already heard about Aanngs past when they were in the cave together
AE: What cave? Because in the Cave of Lovers I don’t remember them sharing stories; they were just trying to escape alive.
. Sokka was in the kitchen eating breakfast
" wow...i didn't think the Avatar would have such a hard life" said Jasper
AE: (Aang) It’s the hard knock life!
" please call me Aanng...but its not so tough...i have my Friends and i learn three of the four elements." said Aanng
" i just wish my son would look up to someone like you...i don't know what wrong with him today.?" said the Farmer
AE: (Jasper) Maybe it’s PMS.
" what he was acting bad towards the Avata...err i mean Aanng?" said June
" yes he was, its strange because he talks about you all the time..i brought you here so he can be happy, but today he was acting funny." said Jasper.
" hmm, well if i talk to him...then maybe he'll fess ups whats wrong with him." said Aanng
AE: (Bad Cop Impression) Yeah, you know rough him up a little; make him ‘fess up.
" actually theres someting i want you to do for me" said Jasper.
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meanwhile Toph was walking on the solid earth and grass(A/E: that way she can see)
AE: *sarcastically* When will the surprises end?!
she walk around a little bit when she heard earthbendeing. she flowed the sounds and went towards them,
" so your and earthbender as well?"
AE: (OOC Toph) Oh, what a guy! He can earthbend!
said Toph. it was Akuma she was talking to, he turn around and talk back to Toph
"yeah, its so i can help around the farm but i pratice for Earthbendening tornments like the one coming up in 1 month." said Akuma
"well you better hope i don't enter...iam the best earthbender in this world." said toph
" oh really? then how about you come in the tournament then dove eyes?" said Akuma
"dove eyes?" said Toph
AE: Dove Eyes? I’d probably kick a guy for that lame pickup line.
" yeah that's my nickname for you since you have white eyes pretty as doves" said Akuma. again toph had blush, she started to think that he really don't know that she's blind.
" are you hitting on me?" ask Toph
AE: *sarcastically* No, he’s just a nice guy.
" no, iam sorry if that's makes you feel uncomfortable...i wont say it again." said Akuma
" no, it OK..its just that your the first person that said that to me about my eyes" said Toph
" what they usually say about your eyes?" ask Akuma
" Akuma...iam blind." said Toph. she felt that when she said that his face was shock.
AE: (Akuma) My face! It burns!
" your blind?...then how can you walk without seeing?" ask Akuma
AE: I’m sorry to rain on this guy’s parade, but most blind folks can walk.
" i can feel the vibrations in the ground...you see, the earth is my eyes." said Toph. she then felt his heartbeat through the ground, she recognizes that heartbeat. it was a heartbeat of concerns,
AE: Sounds like the title of a Jewel album.
like the one her parent's give her. her face turn sad.
" look, i can feel that you are concern for me...don't worry about me i'll be fine." said Toph
" concern for you? iam concern for myself!" said Akuma. Toph was shock
AE: (Toph) It burns!
..she felt that he wasn't lying. " why concern for yourself?" said Toph
" because now i might lose to a girl in the tournament...man this sucks
AE: Like the story!
" said Akuma. Toph just laugh, Akuma then look around and decide to tell Toph a serect. " hey Toph, wanna know someting about me?" said Akuma
AE: No, not really, Gary.
" sure, what do you want me to know?" said Toph
" well...i haven't told no one this...but during the time the Avatar was not around i decided to train myself in the bending arts...so i can do earth, water and fire bending.
AE: *Slaps author* One Avatar! Damn Sue-authors! When will you learn?!
Toph was shock to hear what he said. " so wait...you can master bending arts like the Avatar?" Ask Toph.
" well when you put it that way then yeah!" said Akuma.
AE: *cries*
" hey! i have an idea! why don't you come with us?" said Toph
" sorry but i cant do that...i have my reasons" said Akuma
AE: (Akuma) I could tell you, but then I would have to kill you.
" why? is it because of Aanng?" said Toph
" no its someting Else...come on we should go back to the house." said Akuma
" OK...Akuma...the earths a little fuzzy, can i hold your arm
AE: (Toph) And then we can have sex.
...so you can guide me that is." said Toph
" sure, doves eyes" said Akuma. Toph then grabs Akumas arm and he took her back to the house on the farm.
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meanwhile Jasper was finishing what he wanted Aanng to do for him. Aanng was looking a little confused, so were Sokka and Katarra. " so wait are you sure this is best for your son?" said Aanng
" yes...its time that he take his own lead into his destiny" said the farmer
" but he doest even like Aanng" said Sokka.
" i know but trust me, hes nicer than you think...just reconsider". said June
" well Aanng...what do you think?" said Katara
" well i cant choose weather
AE: (Aang) And the western U.S. will experience rain storms most of today…
he wants to or not..but I'll ask and see what he says" said Ange. All of a sudden Akuma came in the door with Toph.
AE: (Toph) It’s not what you think!
Jasper walks up to Akuma and talks to him.
" Akuma my son..." said the farmer
" yeah farther?" said Akuma
" its time that you help the Avatar, Akuma i want you to leave this place and help the Avatar defeat the fire lord." said the Farmer
AE: They’re all just filled with great ideas, aren’t they?
" what!!!! farther there's no way iam leaveing this farm with this fa..."
AE: -ggot.
" that enough!! Akuma your going and thats final" said Jasper
"no! farther who's gonna protect you from those thugs?! who gonna help you when you are sick?" yelled Akuma
AE: (Akuma) Who’s going to choose your nursing home for you?!
" i have June to help you...whats wrong Akuma? you wanted to help the Avatar ever since you were young? why act like this when you got your dream?" Question the farmer. Akuma paused for a moment. he thought about his past and why he would not help.
AE: His angsty, self-loathing, Gary-Sue past.
" well Akuma?" Ask Jasper
" OK i'll leave with the Avatar...we'll leave tonight.." said Akuma. he then left the room his face still sad. " i'll be in my room packing my stuff." said Akuma. he then went to his room.
" i still say we leave him bad people like that don't need to help the Avatar "said Sokka.
" shut up sokka!! " Toph denfend " you don't know him!! he's nice..and kind...its not his falut hes acting like this!! " Toph defended some more. Sokka back off a little bit, not wanted to get the earthbender mad.
AE: I don’t know about you, but the OOC Toph is getting on my last nerve.
" clam
AE: Reader, just look at the word.
down Toph," said Katarra " Aanng why not try to talk to him a see whats wrong."
Aanng just nodded his head. he went upstairs to Akumas room. when he got there, he saw Akuma
AE: Stripping. (Akuma) I’m too sexy for my shirt!
packing his stuff still looking sad. Akuma turns around to Aanng. " oh..its you...look if you came here to tell me iam wrong for not trying to come with you go ahead. iam not gonna listen." said Akuma
" iam not...i came here to talk" said Aanng
" about what? some carp
AE: Carps and clams. Soon we’ll have the whole ocean.
i wont understand?" said Akuma
" no...Toph said you were nice, so did your farther" said Aanng
" Farther? yeah right...Avatar that man is not my real farther" said Akuma
AE: (Akuma) He’s really my uncle because my real father killed my mother, and turned to the dark side, and… I’ve said too much already.
" not your real Farther? what do you mean?" ask Aanng. Akuma then told Aanng to sit down and he'll explain everything.
" you see...i don't know who my farther is or my mother is...i was found in a basket outside of Jasper's house.
AE: (Akuma) But it wasn’t too bad because it was a Harry & David gift basket.
what was found in my basket was a fire Nation seal". said Akuma
AE: (Fire Nation Seal) Bark! *Clap* *Clap*
" so wait your fire Nation?!" said Aanng in shock
" yeah..that why i don't wanna go with you cuz iam fire nation, and i owe a debt to jasper "
AE: That poker match the other night did not go in Akuma’s favor…
said Akuma
" you know me and you are kinda the same...when i was born i was taking away from my mother and sent to the air temple. i don't know who my farther is, but my teacher monk Gysto was like a farther to me" said Aanng.
" really?" said Akuma. he was shock...Aanng was the same as him. suddenly it was a big bang
AE: And, thus the Universe was born.
outside.
" whats was that?" ask Aanng
" crap! looks like that gang is here!" said Akuma
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that's the end of chapter 3!!!! Hope you like it. the next chapter is the fight sence..yay!!!!!!
AE: No!!!!!!!
Chapter 4: the bald earth bender
AE: I think the author has something with bald characters.
finally a fight sence!!! i been busy writing my other fics
AE: Other fics?! Oh god in Heaven, help us.
and trying to beta-read all of them. but enough of that lets get on with the show!!!...but first the stupid disclaimer: i do not own the avatar but i do own my OC'S!!
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Akuma look out of his bedroom window to see what was that loud bang. he saw that the barn was on fire outside. "oh no...the animals!!!
AE: Lest the animals be killed in happy, happy, happy mixed town!
! it must be there work." said Akuma
" whos work?" ask Aanng.
" I'll explain outside...Aanng you must help me." said Akuma. Aanng nodded his head up and down
AE: Like a bobble-head!
. the went outside and headed towards the barn. meanwhile, the rest was already at the barn looking at it on fire.
AE: (Group) Pretty fire!
"oh no not again!!!" said Jasper
AE: This happens on a regular basis?!
" Farther we have to get inside the barn!! said June
" are you guys crazy?!?!
AE: Yes.
...we have to put out the fire first" said Sokka
" and by 'we' you mean me and Katarra...right?" said Toph
" well duh...i don't have magic powers..so get to work!" said Sokka. Toph just shook her head, her and Katarra start bending. Katarra, use the water in the well to water bend the water on the burning Barn. Toph earth bend the dirt so it can Sumter
AE: History Moment! Fort Sumter, where the first shot of the American Civil War was fired!
out the fire...but the fire don't seem to be dying.
AE: (Fire) You’ll never catch me coppers!
" i don't get it why is it not going out?" said Katarra. suddenly Toph felt something, she felt the ground moving towards Katarra, she recognize that it was earth bending..some one was attacking Katarra.
Toph then kick her feet in the ground and the earth move towards the earth bending that was getting ready to attack Katarra. " Katarra watch out!!! somethings trying to attack you in the ground!!" yelled Toph. Katarra listen to Toph and move back a little. the earth that Toph moved collide with the earth that was heading towards Katarra. when that happen it was a big explosion and a burst of flames came out of the ground.
Katarra who was close by fell back a couple of inches. Sokka ran towards his sister to see if she's ok, but halfway their water appeared in front of him and engulfs his body and the water freezes over him except his head. " what!! where did this water come from?" said Sokka
" it came from me" said a voice.
AE: Here we go with the disembodied voices again.
Sokka look in from of him and see three guys and one girl. they all wore black hooded coats with fire nation symbols on the back.
AE: I’m reaching here, but I think that they may have something to do with the Fire Nation.
the one that spoke to Sokka had short blue hair with blue eyes.
AE: We’ll call him Bluey.
the one next to him had on sunglasses and was bald.
AE: He was a biker.
the girl had black hair tied up in a pony tail
AE: Kind of like Zuko!
and one had long white hair.
AE: But he was really just a ghost, so he didn’t count.
" who are you guys?" ask Toph
" well..if you must know were the one who's gonna kill you." said the bald one
AE: (Dennis) Plankton’s hired me to exterminate you.
" mizuki...shut up" said the white haired one
AE: Who was still a ghost.
" you shut up!! damn why are you so emo Kai ?"
AE: Because you know, those ghosts are just so damn emo.
" leave him alone you know he don't talk much...besides he's right you do need to shut up" said the ponytail one
AE: (One with ponytail) He’s special.
" no one ask for your comment Tao" said Muzuki
" umm...guys can we just get on with the mission?" said the blue hair one. Sokka still confused on whats going on
AE: For once I agree with Sokka.
ask the people who they are." umm who are you guys?"
" oh sorry for the wait
AE: When was the last time your assassin was this polite to you?
but were here to kill that man right there" said the blue hair one
" Quit acting so nice..damn that's gets on my nerves" said Tao
AE: Me too, OC, me too.
suddenly, a tidal wave of water came towards the group. it was from Katarra who woke up and heard what they said. the huge wave of water came towards them and landed on top of them.
AE: (Wave of Water) Body Slam!
" alright you got them!!" said Sokka. but then the water went up in the air and turned into rain water.
" well...as i was saying before i was interrupted. were here to kill the farmer for treason against the fire nation" said the blue haired one.
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elsewhere Aanng and Akuma were on their way the barn. Akuma begins to explain who he was talking about. " ok aanng the people i was talking about are fire Nation agents."
" fire Nation agents? what do they do?"
" well ever since you defeated them at the north pole they been looking for other means of Attacking, so they hired some thugs and called them agents. they been coming to my farm for the supplies we have ...but Jasper's said that their not welcome anymore".
" wait some thugs? what do you mean by that?...are they fire nation?"
AE: Hence the name, Fire Nation Agents.
" well technically no...they're ex-military leaders who left their nations to work for the fire nation."
AE: But, wait. The airbenders were killed, there are very few water nation military leaders, and the earth nation leaders are fighting the fire nation. Are there nations I don’t know about?
" ex-military leaders? from different Nations? so they work for the fire nation and use different bending?" ask the avatar
" yes...and trust me, their the strongest benders you can find." said Akuma.
meanwhile Jasper's yells
AE: Of immense pain.
at the agents while Katarra was trying to get Sokka free from the ice prison hold. Toph was guarding the old man. " look i told you guys i don't work for the fire nation!!! leave this place immediately!!" said Jasper
" you work for the fire nation when you decided to give us supplies..now that you don't you no longer work for us old man." said Tao
" so who wants to take care of this?" said the blue haired one.
" i'll do it...i haven't had no fun in a while" said Mizuki.
" suit yourself...meet us back in the fire nation." said the blue haired one. a white cloud
AE: What in the name of sweet Jesus is going on?
came underneath them and they disappeared leaving Mizuki behind. Toph Katarra and the freed Sokka stood in front of Jasper.
" hn, trying to protect him huh? well that won't work" said Mizuki
" we won't let you kill Akumas farther...and your outnumbered" said Sokka
" well its three against one...sounds fair"
AE: His math is so screwed up, it actually is funny.
said Mizuki"
Toph move her arms forwards towards muziki, a huge bolder came from behind her and toward Muzuki. Mizuki put his hands in the air and a big wall of rock came in front of him, blocking the bolder. he then pushes the wall of Rock towards the gang. Katarra uses the Water in her pouch to cut the wall of Rock down.
AE: I’m not a science expert here, but I thought it took water a long time to cut through rock.
she then uses her water to whip Muzki..
Muzuki had block the water whip with his earth bending. Sokka try to attack him from behind with his boomerang sword but Muzuki dodges and kicks Sokka in the stomach, sending him back a couple of feet.
" Sokka!!" cried Toph feeling that Sokka had got hurt. she then earth bend the earth, out came a lot of spiked rocks. she earthbendeing them to attack Muzuki. Muzuki who was to busy fighting Katarra didn't Notice the spiked Rocks coming towards him. Katarra creates an ice shield so she won't get hit. Muzuki notice that the rocks are coming towards him.but its to late and he gets hit by multiple spiked rocks and blood starts coming out of his mouth knocking off his glasses. muzuki slowly falls to the ground.
AE: I hate reading crappy fighting scenes like this, so I’m not going to say anything.
" Toph! you did it!!" said Katarra thinking that Muzuki is dead. Sokka slowly gets up and walks toward Toph, " great job Toph." Sokka said
" thanks Sokka...are you ok?" said Toph
" yeah iam fine no earth bender is gonna hurt the mighty Sokka!" said Sokka. Toph smiled, a little happy that Sokka was OK. suddenly a voice said " mighty Sokka huh? we'll see about that.
a rock came towards Toph, Sokka push Toph out of the way and slice the rock in two...but the rock exploded on Sokka's Body. Sokka fell to the ground screaming in pain.
AE: Because having a rock explode on you has got to hurt like Hell, I’m guessing.
Toph felt the heat coming from Sokka
" Sokka!" Toph scream. Tears began to from around her white eyes as she holds Sokkas body.
" Sokka!! what the hell you do to him?!?" yelled Katarra
" all i didn't was Attack him with my Exploding Rocks
AE: That’s all.
...its not my fault he got in the way" smiled Muziki evilly
AE: Or seductively?
. he then earth bend more rocks and threw them at Katara. she tries to block them but the after effects of Muzki's earthbendeing bomb explode in front of Katara sending her back a few feet. Katarra then passes out.
AE: *screams in rage* Katara is not a damsel in distress like all of the Sue-authors lead us to believe!
" well that just leaves one." said the bald villain
AE: This story shows definite baldism.
. he makes one more round of exploding rocks...when suddenly a gush of air came at Mizuki. he falls back to the ground at look to see who did that.
" hey, why don't you take me on?" said Aanng. with Akuma
AE: (Aang) Hey, how about we all get out of this crappy fic?
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" who are you guys?" said the bald earth bender
" I'm the Avatar...and you hurt my Friends!!" said Aanng holding his staff
Akuma look around the Field to see where everybody. he see Jasper's and June by the barn (A/E: its destroyed by now)
AE: *Sarcastically* Really?!
Toph holding the injured Sokka and Katara lying on the ground.
" Aanng take care of him for a while..I'll check up on the others" said Akuma. he then went of to were Toph and Sokka were at. Muzuki then talks to Aanng, " well, well, the last air bender...hopefully when i kill you fire lord Ozai will be pleased" said Muzuki.
AE: No, he won’t. He wants the Avatar alive.
" look i don't wanna hurt you
AE: But I do.
...so give up now" said Aanng
" sorry i cant let that happen" said Mizuki.
he then summons more Rocks the size of boulders towards the Avatar. Aanng sends his air towards the rocks and pushes it behind him, which exploded behind him "he can cause the rocks to explode!? i better be careful" Aanng thought to himself.
meanwhile Toph felt Akuma footsteps. her face turned happy
AE: Even though Sokka was lying on the ground with fatal injuries.
" Akuma!! thank god your here...please...help him!!" said Toph. Akuma just nodded his head. he then pulled out a can of water and water bend it on to Sokkas body. he closes his eyes and turned the water into a bright color, healing Sokka.
AE: He can heal too? God, I haven’t seen a Gary Sue this bad in a while.
Sokka eyes open within seconds, " uhh...T-Toph?" said Sokka weakly. Toph Happy
AE: (Toph) Toph happy. Toph like Gary!
that Sokka is ok hugs him tightly. "oww...Toph not so hard..." said Sokka. but Toph hug him harder.
AE: Thus, killing Sokka.
to Akuma this annoyed him a little, he raises an eyebrow at them and close his eyes. "ummm...iam gonna help Katarra now...see you ...doves eyes" said Akuma. he then went off feeling a little sad. " i don't get it..why am i feeling like this after i saw how she hug him?" Thought Akuma. he then went off to help Katara and did the same thing with Sokka.
Meanwhile Aanng was fighting Muzuki. Aanng runs a fast speed towards the villain, muzuki earth bends the ground into a from of a cannon. he punches the Cannon to launch out the exploding rocks towards Aanng.
Aanng pushes the rocks behind him with his airbendeing. he then jumps and falls back to the ground earth bending the earth forward towards Muzuki. Muzuki blocks the earth coming towards him. he then lift his arms in the air and summons a huge gigantic rock the size of a house. he then threw it towards Aanng.
the rock came towards Aanng. the Avatar to one huge breath and out of his mouth came out a huge gush of air. the rock stood in the air as Aanng tries to blow it back. but its no use Aanng runs out of breath
AE: Like the Big, Bad, Wolf!
and the rock come towards him. suddenly fire came out of nowhere and burn the huge rock, causing it to explode in the air.
Akuma appeared in front of Aanng. " wow Aanng...i thought the Avatar was unbeatable" said Akuma who hands were smoking.
AE: Crack!
" Akuma..you can fire bend?" said Aanng
" and water bend as well...maybe I'll teach you when we leave." smiled Akuma.
AE: Teach Aang? Aang’s got waterbending down, Gary!
" yeah...but first we have to defeat this guy..." said Aanng.
" don't worry i got a plan...think you can air bend him in the air?" said Akuma
" sure I'll try...just give me an opening" said Aanng. Akuma nodded his head, he went towards the bald villain. Mizuki earth bends the ground into a from of a huge tiger...the rock tiger
AE: Not to be confused with Tony the Tiger.
pounces on Akuma, but Akuma appeared in the air with the tiger below him. Akuma put his hands together and out came a stream of fire hitting the rock tiger exploded.
then Akuma appeared in front of mizuki and with his can of water threw it on him. Mizuki looks that his body. " what the hell?!?! what do you think Water will do to me!?" yelled Mizuki
" well...it can do this" said Akuma he then water bend the water on Mizuki to turn into ice. Mizuki now could not move, " ahh!! let me go!!!" Demanded the bald earth bender.
" now Aanng!!" said Akuma
Aanng then ran towards mizuki and with his staff, air bended him in the air. While muzuki was in the air, Akuma appeared on the ground underneath him.
" you think this is gonna stop me!" yelled Mizuki. he then starts to think of a plan to finish them off " this is nothing...when i hit the ground I'll just make the earth explode in the whole land and kill them all"
AE: Kind of like a nuclear bomb!
Mizuki then breaks the ice that was holding him. and Dive headfirst towards Akuma. Akuma close both of his fist tightly " hey! iam sorry...but this is where i have to stop this!!!"
Akuma then punches the ground and keeps on punching it. around him are a whole lot of pillars going up and down really fast. Mizuki shock couldn't do nothing get hit on his back by the pillars one by one. his blood starts coming out of his mouth.
AE: As opposed to his eyes, unlike me.
when Akuma stops making the pillars come out of the ground, Mizuki falls to the ground and hits the earth lying motionless. Akuma and Aanng try to catch there breath, while Katara limps over towards them both and Toph carries the injured Sokka.
for the battle was over...
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man that was a great battle
AE: No, no it wasn’t.
...well tell me what you think?
AE: Kid, you don’t want to know what I think.
please review!!!!!
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Well, I’m not sure who won that battle. I survived, but I am sure that I will have lasting scars. But I survived with (some) of my sanity intact, so I guess we’ll call it a draw.
Redeeming Feature:
It’s a unique idea to pair Toph with someone other than Sokka, Aang, or Zuko.
RAP SHEET:
~Major OOC-ness throughout the fic.
~A second Avatar.
~Two Words: Gary Sue.
~Boring fight scenes.
~Spelling so bad it makes you reach for the Dictionary for comfort.
~Grammar. Grammar so bad, it makes your eyes bleed, and when they are done bleeding, they shrivel up.
Credits
"bond between friends" by Ryo-kun313
MiSTed by Avenger of English
MiSTing concept by Best Brains Inc.
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" iam not...i came here to talk" said Aanng
" about what? some carp i wont understand?" said Akuma
